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The graph below shows the number of tourists visting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where revelant. Write at least 150 words.

The graph below shows the number of tourists visting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. 7aa5y
The line graph below illustrates the number of tourists visiting a Caribbean island over the period of 7 years starting from 2010. Generally, it is calibrated in millions. Overall, it is lucid that tourists over the years visiting the island has significantly increased In the year 2010, the number of visitors recorded was exactly 1 Million out of which three-fold of people prefer to stay on the island. Over the course of 2 years, people preferred to stay in ships has dramatically decreased and reached its lowest point (0. 25 Million) where most of them prefer to stay on the island (1. 25 Million) and the graph shown dramatic increase until 2015 for both of them. In the end, the figures for people visiting Caribbean islands increased sharply by hitting their highest point(3. 5 Million). In the same period, people prefer to stay on cruise ships has increased to 2 million surpassing those who preferred to stay on an island.
The line graph below illustrates the number of tourists visiting a Caribbean
island
over the period of 7 years starting from 2010.
Generally
, it
is calibrated
in millions.

Overall
, it is lucid that tourists over the years visiting the
island
has
significantly
increased

In the
year
2010, the number of visitors recorded was exactly 1
Million
out of which three-fold of
people
prefer to
stay
on the
island
. Over the course of 2 years,
people
preferred to
stay
in ships has
dramatically
decreased and reached its lowest point (0. 25
Million)
where most of them prefer to
stay
on the
island
(1. 25
Million)
and the graph shown dramatic increase until 2015 for both of them.

In the
end
, the figures for
people
visiting Caribbean
islands
increased
sharply
by hitting their highest point(3. 5
Million)
. In the same period,
people
prefer to
stay
on cruise ships has increased to 2
million
surpassing those who preferred to
stay
on an
island
.
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IELTS academic The graph below shows the number of tourists visting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
160 words
6.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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