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The table shows the numbers of cinema viewing figures for films in four different countries: India, Ireland, New Zealand and Japan. There are analyzed such genres as action, romance, comedy and horror. According to the table, the highest number of people who go to the cinema is in India and three other countries have lower amount. Action films are the most popular in all four countries and approximately 7 or 8 million of people watch them. The total number of viewers is almost 30 million.  Romance films are very popular in India, but in other countries this figure is two times lower. This genre is the most popular in India too. On the other hand, horror films aren´t as viewed as other kinds. The table shows the lowest numbers of people in Japan and India, even though in Ireland it is more preferable. To conclude, India has the largest cinema viewing figures for films with 24. 5 million people while the minimum number of people watching movies are in Japan with 17. 8 million. Ireland with 23. 3 million viewers followed closely behind by India, while New Zealand holds the third highest viewership numbers with 20. 3 million people.
The table
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of cinema viewing figures for films in four
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countries: India, Ireland, New Zealand and Japan. There
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such genres as action,

romance, comedy and horror.

According to the table, the highest
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of
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who go to the cinema is in India

and three
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countries have lower amount. Action films are the most popular in all four

countries and approximately 7 or 8
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of
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them. The total
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is almost 30
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.  Romance films are
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popular in India,
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in
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countries this figure

is two times lower. This genre is the most popular in India too.

On the
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hand, horror films aren´t as viewed as
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kinds. The table
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lowest
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in Japan and India,
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in Ireland it is more preferable.

To conclude
, India has the largest cinema viewing figures for films with 24. 5 million

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while the minimum
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of
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watching movies are in Japan with 17. 8 million.

Ireland with 23. 3
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viewers followed
closely
behind by India, while New Zealand holds the

third highest viewership
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with 20. 3
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