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The given birth chart compares the percentage of self and rented accommodation from 1918 to 2011 in England and Wales. Overall at the beginning self living house was far less than rented house. However, both proportion were be equalled in the mid time, which later totally reversed and owned accommodation ratio ranked in in top. In 1918, around 78% people England and Wales had lived in home by paying, while near 24% had lived in their own houses. However fluctuation was observed for owned and rented accommodation proportion and both were reached in an equal point in 1971. Later, in 1981 owned household holders ratio interest to 60% and rented ratio decreased to 40%. In 1991 and 2001, between the 10 years, self accommodation percentage was reached almost 70% but no change observed in case of rented house. Finally in 2011, after a little bit change, owned and rented ratio were fixed to around 65% and 35% respectively

The This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 birth chart compares the percentage of self and rented You use this word too often, consider replacing it withreconciliationcompromise
accommodation
 from 1918 to 2011 in England and Wales.

Overall
 at the beginning self living You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingboxapartmentdwellingresidenceshack
house
 was far less than rented You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingboxapartmentdwellingresidenceshack
house
. However
, both proportion Did you mean "where" or "we"?wherewe
were
Consider using a past participle here: "been".been
be
 equalled in the mid time, which later totally
 reversed and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpurchased
owned
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withreconciliationcompromise
accommodation
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withratescaleproportionquota
ratio
 ranked Possible typo: you repeated a wordin
in in
 top.

In 1918, around 78% This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 England and Wales had This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :resided
lived
 in home by paying, while near 24% had This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :resided
lived
 in their This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingboxapartmentdwellingresidenceshack
houses
. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?However,
However
 fluctuation was observed
 for You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpurchased
owned
 and rented You use this word too often, consider replacing it withreconciliationcompromise
accommodation
 proportion and both were reached
 in an equal point in 1971. Later, in 1981 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpurchased
owned
 household Apostrophe might be missing. Did you mean "holders'" or "holder's"?holders'holder's
holders
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withratescaleproportionquota
ratio
 interest to 60% and rented You use this word too often, consider replacing it withratescaleproportionquota
ratio
 decreased to 40%. In 1991 and 2001, between the 10 years, self You use this word too often, consider replacing it withreconciliationcompromise
accommodation
 percentage was reached
 almost 70% This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 no This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 observed in case of rented You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingboxapartmentdwellingresidenceshack
house
. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Finally,
Finally
 in 2011, after a Reduce redundancy by using "little" or "bit".littlebit
little bit
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpurchased
owned
 and rented You use this word too often, consider replacing it withratescaleproportionquota
ratio
 were This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :rectified
fixed
 to around 65% and 35% Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphrespectively.respectively!respectively?respectively:respectively,respectively;
respectively