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Biography of Taylor Swift

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Born on 13th December 1989, Taylor Swift spent her 13 years of memorable childhood in West Reading, Pennsylvania. Now she is a pop singer, a songwriter, an actress and a successful businessman. It is claimed that Taylor Swift is such an “all-around” in the music industry. Taylor Swift started her career at a very young age - 14 years old to be exact, until the recent year, she has contributed to American music for 17 years with all meaningful lyrics and brimful passion conveyed through beautiful songs. Talking about her works, one of Taylor’s best songs is “Safe and sound”. Being considered the most healing melody, many people are emotionally inspired listening to the song. It won the Grammy’s Best Song Written for Visual Media in 2013. The “folklore”, which won the 2021 Grammy’s Best Album of the year, is "a collection of songs and stories that flowed like a stream of consciousness" out of the imagination, it consists of exploring perspectives of characters interweaving across the tracks that diverge from her life. The album is highly recommended all over the world and receives a plethora of positive critical reception. There are other Grammy awards that made up the number of 10 important achievements of Taylor Swift from one of the biggest awards recognizing the artists’ contributions to the world’s music industry. The talented singer-songwriter honourably achieved an Emmy award and 7 Guinness World Records and was ranked 8th place in Billboard’s All-Time Best Artist Chart. There is no doubt in saying Taylor Swift is a music icon and one of the most loved artists all over the world.
Born on 13th December 1989, Taylor
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spent her 13 years of memorable childhood in West Reading, Pennsylvania.
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she is a pop singer, a songwriter, an actress and a successful businessman. It
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is such an “all-around” in the
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music
industry. Taylor
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started
her career at a
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, she has contributed to American
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for 17 years with all meaningful lyrics and brimful passion conveyed through
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songs. Talking about her works, one of Taylor’s
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songs is “Safe and sound”.
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emotionally
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Song Written for Visual Media in 2013. The “folklore”, which won the 2021 Grammy’s
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Album of the
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a collection of songs and stories that flowed like a stream of consciousness
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out of the imagination, it consists of exploring perspectives of characters interweaving across the
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achievements of Taylor
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from one of the biggest awards recognizing the artists’ contributions to the
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industry. The talented singer-songwriter
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achieved an Emmy award and 7 Guinness
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Artist Chart. There is no doubt in saying Taylor
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is a
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icon and one of the most
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IELTS academic Biography of Taylor Swift

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