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Manufacturing of coffee beans

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The diagram illustrates the procedure of coffee manufacturing. This process undergoes into several phases. Firstly, the coffee beans has been picked from the garden by plantation worker. After that, they are placed in the land under the presence of sunlight. Then beans are taken and placed under the chamber where roasting step has been done. In the next step, beans are immediately set down in the cooling chamber. Subsequently, they are crushed to form a course particles and added into a hot water to demolished the impurities. Furthermore, the beans are extracted from the vessel with the help of metal grid. Then the mixture added in frozen chamber. With the help of manual grinder the beans became more finer. Later on, they are placed in a vaccum for drying purpose from where the moisture (water) is escaped out. Once the stage is completed, coffee are packed into air tight containers. Labeling has done on the bottle jars and suspended into the markets
The diagram illustrates the procedure of coffee manufacturing. This process undergoes into several phases.

Firstly
, the coffee
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beans
has
been picked
from the garden by plantation worker. After that, they
are placed
in the land under the presence of sunlight. Then
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
beans
are taken
and placed under the chamber where roasting step has
been done
. In the
next
step,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
beans
are immediately set down in the cooling chamber.
Subsequently
, they
are crushed
to form a course particles and
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added
into
Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply "hot water".
a hot water
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to demolished
the impurities.

Furthermore
, the
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beans
are extracted
from the vessel with the
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help
of metal grid. Then the mixture
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
added
in frozen chamber. With the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
of manual grinder the
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beans
became
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more finer
. Later on, they
are placed
in a
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vaccum
for drying purpose from where the moisture (water)
is escaped
out.

Once the stage
is completed
, coffee
are packed
into air tight containers. Labeling has done on the bottle jars and suspended into the
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markets

IELTS academic Manufacturing of coffee beans

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
161 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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