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The pie chart below show about the charity money spend on USA and saved in 2016

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The pie chart illustrator about the amount of money spent by us a charity on children and received in 2016after analysing it can simply that the 86% revenue comes from donated food however 10. 4% amount contributed by community the investment income or government currents in is 0. 2 % white is the percentages of revenue of programs and other income is 2. 2 % and 0. 4 % respectivelyfurthermore most of expenditure expenditure created by program service is 95. 8 % after that 2. 6 % spend on fundraising by Charity the cell is given by trust to management and general are 1. 6%han study venue of charity is 500 t then expenditures is 552 and the profits generated by charities anil about 330
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expenditure created by program service is 95. 8 % after that 2. 6 % spend on fundraising by
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