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Minutes spent per day on leisure activities in the UK in 1961. Summrize and compare where relevant.

Minutes spent per day on leisure activities in the UK in 1961. Summrize and compare where relevant. Ewo8b
The pie chart which is given below shows the spent of time by minutes daily on leisure activities in the United kingdom in 1961. Leisure activities are not socializing, sports and walking but also Eating out, cinema, pubs TV, radio and other leisure at home. TV and radio was dominated among all other leisure activities particularly in UK. Just before half of the chart specifically 139 minutes per day was spent in 1961. However, 74 minutes per day was spent on other leisure activities in the above year in UK. Third, highest among all activities was socialising which time spent rate was 35 minutes daily. Afterward, Eating out, cinema, pubs and many more activities which were spent on 28 minutes which same as a small portion of the chart. Followed by, doing sports and walking outside. To sum up, the smallest spent was just 9 minutes on walking, roughly 130 minutes lower than the dominated one and 65 lower than other leisure activities at home. In addition, 7 more minutes daily spent on the thirdly in comparison to the Eating out, cinema and pubs which was second from the last.
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IELTS academic Minutes spent per day on leisure activities in the UK in 1961. Summrize and compare where relevant.

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