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coffee and tea in five different cities of Australia

coffee and tea in five different cities of Australia 2R9BA

The bar chart compares the demand for coffee and tea in five different cities of Australia over a period of 4 weeks. We can easily see that the majority of these people are more likely to go to a cafe for coffee or tea, while the need for fresh coffee is much less than other needs. It is noticeable that almost half of the citizens in these five cities tend to drink coffee or tea in a cafe, and over 60 percent of people in Melbourne, Hobart, and Sydney are likely to choose a cafe. However, there are less than 45 percent of people who like buying and drinking fresh coffee, especially citizens in Brisbane and Adelaide both of which are below 35 percent. Unlike people in the other four cities who tend for fresh coffee instead of other choices, almost half of people in Adelaide prefer instant coffee which is a little bit more than people who love fresh coffee.

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