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The given graphs compare the rate of engineers who held Bachelor, Master and PhD degrees in Arts and Science faculties (in faculties of Arts and Science) during a 28-year period, starting from 1980 to 2008.

The given graphs compare the rate of engineers who held Bachelor, Master and PhD degrees in Arts and Science faculties (in faculties of Arts and Science) during a 28-year period, starting from 1980 to 2008. RR8Bp
The given charts demonstrate the proportions of engineers who held Bachelor, Master and PhD certificates in Arts and Science faculties between 1980 and 2008. Overall, it is noticeable that there was an increase in the figures for people who had PhD qualification, while that of Bachelor's had an opposite trend and that of Master’s remained for both years. In addition, science programmes seemed to be more popular than arts ones. As is presented in the graphs, the Bachelor Arts accounted for a quarter of the figure in 1980 before reducing to 11% 28 years later. However, in 1980, the proportion of PhD Arts rose fourfold from 2%. Similarly, there was a slight increase by 1% in the quantity of Master Arts. By 1980, the percentage of PhD Science was about 13% and in 2008, this figure rose dramatically to 30%. In contrast, the quantity of Bachelor Science experienced a decrease by 9% in the period of 28 year. In addition, the figure for Master Science remained unchanged at about 29% in both years.
The
given
charts demonstrate the proportions of engineers who held Bachelor,
Master
and PhD certificates in
Arts
and
Science
faculties between 1980 and 2008.

Overall
, it is noticeable that there was an increase in the
figures
for
people
who had PhD qualification, while that of Bachelor's had an opposite trend and that of
Master’s
remained for both years.
In addition
,
science
programmes
seemed to be more popular than
arts
ones.

As
is presented
in the graphs, the Bachelor
Arts
accounted for a quarter of the
figure
in 1980
before
reducing to 11% 28 years later.
However
, in 1980, the proportion of PhD
Arts
rose fourfold from 2%.
Similarly
, there was a slight increase by 1% in the quantity of
Master
Arts.

By 1980, the percentage of PhD
Science
was about 13% and in 2008, this
figure
rose
dramatically
to 30%.
In contrast
, the quantity of Bachelor
Science
experienced a decrease by 9% in the period of 28
year
.
In addition
, the
figure
for
Master
Science
remained unchanged at about 29% in both years.
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IELTS academic The given graphs compare the rate of engineers who held Bachelor, Master and PhD degrees in Arts and Science faculties (in faculties of Arts and Science) during a 28-year period, starting from 1980 to 2008.

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