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The bar chart shows world pineapple exports by the top three producing countries. The three countries A, B and C are listed on the x-axis, and the metric tonnes in millions are on the y-axis. In The bar chart shows world pineapple exports by the top three producing countries. The three countries A, B and C are listed on the x-axis, and the metric tonnes in millions are on the y-axis. In The bar chart shows world pineapple exports by the top three producing countries. The three countries A, B and C are listed on the x-axis, and the metric tonnes in millions are on the y-axis. In
The bar chart
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world pineapple exports by the top three producing
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A, B and C
are listed
on the x-axis, and the metric tonnes in millions are on the y-axis.

In The bar chart
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shows
world pineapple exports by the top three producing
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
countries
. The three
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
countries
A, B and C
are listed
on the x-axis, and the metric tonnes in millions are on the y-axis.

In The bar chart
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
shows
world pineapple exports by the top three producing
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
countries
. The three
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
countries
A, B and C
are listed
on the x-axis, and the metric tonnes in millions are on the y-axis.

In
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IELTS academic Benefits of a healthy breakfast

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
107 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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