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Consumer expenditure in five countries in 2003

Consumer expenditure in five countries in 2003 lqLab
The table compares five different nations in terms of consumer expenditure on various items in 2002. Overall, food/drinks and tobacco required higher proportion of consumer spending in these countries, as opposed to leisure and education whose fraction was the smallest. Moreover, the amount of expenses allocated to clothing and footwear in the given countries, except for Italy, was proportional. Looking at the table, it is also clear that, the Irish and the Turks spent most of their income on food/drinks and tobacco 28, 91% and 32, 14% respectively, though the figure for the aspect was less than a fifth in other three nations. In terms of clothing/footwear, Italy was dominant with the figure accounting for 9. 00%, while consumers in the other countries proportionally out around 6%of their money into this category. As for Spain, only 1. 98%of total spending was channeled to leisure/education with the Turks allocating larger fraction compared to the other countries.
The table compares five
different
nations in terms of consumer expenditure on various items in 2002.

Overall
, food/drinks and tobacco required higher proportion of consumer spending in these
countries
, as opposed to leisure and education whose fraction was the smallest.
Moreover
, the amount of expenses allocated to clothing and footwear in the
given
countries
,
except for
Italy, was proportional.

Looking at the table, it is
also
clear
that, the Irish and the Turks spent most of their income on food/drinks and tobacco 28, 91% and 32, 14%
respectively
, though the figure for the aspect was less than a fifth in other three nations.

In terms of clothing/footwear, Italy was dominant with the figure accounting for 9. 00%, while consumers in the other
countries
proportionally
out around 6%of their money into this category.

As for Spain,
only
1. 98%of total spending
was channeled
to leisure/education with the Turks allocating larger fraction compared to the other
countries
.
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IELTS academic Consumer expenditure in five countries in 2003

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  American English
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155 words
6.5
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