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report use of technology in the Marekting Department

report use of technology in the Marekting Department 3Wbpm

Purpose As requested, the purpose of this proposal is to describe and analyse the possible use of technology in the Marketing Department. Current use of technology Up to now the members of our department have taken advantage of technological equipment i. e. computers, in order to launch our products most successfully. Not only have we arranged promotional and advertising campaigns but we have also conducted market research via the internet so as to meet our consumers growing demands. Technological Improvements In our work we have used computer software and hardware which has already become obsolete and urgently needs modernisation. Therefore, the purchase of up-to-date programmes and equipment is of prime importance. Benefits There is no denying that these improvements will bring vast profits to the company. Our team will be able to work faster, more effectively and make greater use of technological innovations. Moreover, our company will be more likely to easily overcome fierce competition in the market. Training It seems obvious that our staff does not possess the knowledge of how to use new software. Thus, training on the use of modern programmes would be recommended as necessary. Conclusion To sum up, it seems obvious that the introduction of new technology into the Marketing Department will enable the company to gain huge profits. Our position in the market will be strengthened.

Purpose

As requested, the purpose of this proposal is to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :characterizeportray
describe
 and Possible spelling mistake. 'analyse' is British English.analyze
analyse
 the possible This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 of technology in the Marketing Department.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :contemporarymodern
Current
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 of technology

Up to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 the members of our department have taken advantage of technological equipment There should be no space here: "i.e.".i.e.
i. e.
 computers, in order to launch our products most successfully
. Not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 have we arranged promotional and advertising campaigns This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 we have also
 conducted market research via the internet 'So as to' expresses purpose and is used in formal texts. Consider using "to"to
so as to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :attain
meet
 our consumers growing

demands.

Technological Improvements

In our work we have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 computer software and hardware which has already become obsolete and urgently
 needs Possible spelling mistake. 'modernisation' is British English.modernization
modernisation
. Therefore
, the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
purchase
 of up-to-date Possible spelling mistake. 'programmes' is British English.programs
programmes
 and equipment is of prime importance.

Benefits

There is no denying that these improvements will bring vast profits to the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
. Our team will be able to work faster, more effectively
 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 greater This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 of technological innovations. Moreover
, our This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 will be more likely to easily
 overcome fierce competition in the market.

Training

It seems obvious that our staff does not possess the knowledge of how to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 new software. Thus
, training on the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 of modern Possible spelling mistake. 'programmes' is British English.programs
programmes
 would be recommended
 as necessary.

Conclusion

To sum up, it seems obvious that the introduction of new technology into the Marketing Department will enable the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 to gain huge profits. Our position in the market will be strengthened
. 