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Report: Photocopier Costs

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Report: Photocopier Costs Of the three types of photocopiers, Carda, KD and Sebu, the purchase price of the Carda is the lowest. It is slightly more than $600 but its expected running cost for the first two years is the highest with its warranty cost at the mid-level of the three photocopiers. In comparison, the purchase price of the KD is a little more than that of the Carda which is $700; whereas the expected running cost of the KD is much less than that of the Carda which is $1, 200. However, the KD’s warranty cost is the highest of the three at $200. In comparison the Sebu’s purchase price is the highest of the three, i. e. $1000, but it costs consumers the least in warranty and running for the first two years. What’s more, the expected total cost of the Carda for the initial 2-year period is $1, 900, more than that of both the Sebu and KD, $1, 800. In conclusion it would be advisable to buy the KD photocopier which is generally more advantageous in cost than its competitors
Report: Photocopier Costs

Of the three types of photocopiers,
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Carda
, KD and
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Sebu
, the
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purchase
price of the
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is the lowest. It is
slightly
more than $600
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its
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running
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for the
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two years is the highest with its warranty
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at the mid-level of the three photocopiers.

In comparison
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purchase
price of the KD is a
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little
more than that of the
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Carda
which is $700; whereas the
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running
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cost
of the KD is much less than that of the
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Carda
which is $1, 200.
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, the KD’s warranty
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cost
is the highest of the three at $200. In
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comparison
the
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Sebu
’s
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price is the highest of the three,
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i. e.
$1000,
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consumers the least in warranty and running for the
first
two years.

What’s more, the
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expected
total
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cost
of the
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Carda
for the initial 2-year period is $1, 900, more than that of both the
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Sebu
and KD, $1, 800.

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would be advisable to
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cost
than its competitors
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IELTS academic Report: Photocopier Costs

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  American English
4 paragraphs
183 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
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