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The bar chart illustrates the number of people using mobile and cable per 100 people in seven various nations.

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The bar chart illustrates the number of people using mobile and cable per 100 people in seven various nations. Overall, it can be seen from the graph that most of the nations tend to prefer cellphone rather than landlines with exception is Canada, US, and Denmark. In terms of mobile, Italia represents the highest number in 100 people, which is 90 people, followed by Sweden (nearly 88), UK (85), and Denmark (about 82). Over 70 people use mobile phones in Germany, while the number of people using cellphones in the US is about 48. The lowest figure in people using mobile is approximately 38 people, belonging to Canada. Denmark records the highest number of people using landlines, which is to about 88, this figure declines by nearly 28 people in Germany. The number of people using cable in the US tied with that of Sweden at 68 people. Above 61 people use landlines in Canada, this figure is respectively higher than about 57 and 43 people in the UK and Italy.
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using mobile and cable per 100
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in seven various nations.

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In terms of mobile,
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in 100
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, which is 90
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, followed by Sweden (
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mobile phones in Germany, while the
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using cellphones in the US is about 48. The lowest figure in
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using mobile is approximately 38
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, belonging to Canada.

Denmark records the highest
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using landlines, which is to about 88, this figure declines by
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in Germany. The
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using cable in the US tied with that of Sweden at 68
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. Above 61
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landlines in Canada, this figure is
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IELTS academic The bar chart illustrates the number of people using mobile and cable per 100 people in seven various nations.

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