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Barrels of Oil. The figures indicate that while the production of oil in Middle Eastern OPEC countries is predicted to increase considerably, oil production elsewhere is likely to fall.

Barrels of Oil. The figures indicate that while the production of oil in Middle Eastern OPEC countries is predicted to increase considerably, oil production elsewhere is likely to fall. YB96Q
The graph gives past, present and future data concerning the production of world’s oil on OPEC and non-OPEC countries. The figures indicate that while the production of oil in Middle Eastern OPEC countries is predicted to increase considerably, oil production elsewhere is likely to fall. Between 1980 and 2000, most of the world’s oil came from non-OPEC countries; only two million barrels per day were produced by OPEC countries. Since then, these figures have changed considerably. Between 2000 and 2010 it is predicted that approximately 10 million barrels will come from Middle Eastern OPEC countries, while a further 10 million barrels will be provided by other OPEC or non-OPEC countries. Although forecasters predict that oil production is likely stabilise between 2010 and 2020, a lot more of this oil is expected to come from the Middle Eastern OPEC countries, and under 5 million barrels per day from other areas.
The graph gives past, present and future data concerning the
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production
of world’s
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oil
on OPEC and non-OPEC
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countries
. The figures indicate that while the
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production
of
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oil
in Middle Eastern OPEC
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countries
is predicted
to increase
considerably
,
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oil
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production
elsewhere is likely to fall.

Between 1980 and 2000, most of the world’s
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oil
came from non-OPEC
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countries
;
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only
two
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million
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barrels
per day
were produced
by OPEC
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countries
. Since then, these figures have
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changed
considerably
. Between 2000 and 2010 it
is predicted
that approximately 10
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million
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barrels
will
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come
from Middle Eastern OPEC
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countries
, while a
further
10
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million
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barrels
will
be provided
by other OPEC or non-OPEC countries.

Although forecasters predict that
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oil
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production
is likely
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stabilise
between 2010 and 2020, a lot more of this
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oil
is
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expected
to
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come
from the Middle Eastern OPEC
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countries
, and under 5
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million
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barrels
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IELTS academic Barrels of Oil. The figures indicate that while the production of oil in Middle Eastern OPEC countries is predicted to increase considerably, oil production elsewhere is likely to fall.

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