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The table below shows the worldwide market share of the notebook computer market for manufacturers in the years 2006 and 2007.

The table below shows the worldwide market share of the notebook computer market for manufacturers in the years 2006 and 2007. njn2

The table presents the percentages of the notebook brand market shares been sold worldwide in 2006 and 2007. Overall, the proportion of HP, Dell, Toshiba, and others increased, while Acer, Lenovo, Fujitsu-Siemens and others experienced a slight decrease in one year period. HP laptop was the most popular laptop being sold in 2007, which was around a third from all brands in the world. It continued to be most popular in 2007 with a slight increase of 4% in sell proportion. Toshiba and Dell sell proportions just grew slightly, from 6. 2 and 16, 6% to 7. 3% and just above a fifth, respectively in 2007. In terms of Acer and other brands, the sold declined slightly by approximately 2% and 1 % and become just over a ten and under a fifth. Fujitsu-Siemens was the least popular laptop to be sold in 2006, which only accounted for 4. 8% sells worldwide. Also, it continued to be less popular laptop’s brand that been sold worldwide by around a halved in 2008.

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