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Bar graph shows the percentage of older people in three countries in three year

Bar graph shows the percentage of older people in three countries in three year 1VBkN

The bar graph illustrates the information about the percentile of older people in three distinct countries in the year 1980, 2000 and 2030. The data has been calibrated in percentage As presented in the graph, the percentage of elder citizens in Canada was only 10%, then it inclined by 5% in Germany, whereas the percentile of older people in the UK was approximately 13%. After 20 years, grey hair people's percentage in canada increased and reached at 20% while in Germany it surged by 5% accounted as 20%, however in UK the percentage reached at 15%. Moving further into the graph, it is estimated that the percentage of elders in 2030 will be changed. In Germany the percentile of older people will be reached at peak 25% nevertheless in other countries Canada and UK the percentage anticipated is 22 and 19% respectively. Overall, in Germany the percentage of people was higher as compared to others and least was in the UK. It is predicted that the percentage in all countries will be incline.

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