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With bar and pie charts, there is often a key which tells you what each different bar or area represents. With tables, read the data across the rows and down the columns to identify the key features.

With bar and pie charts, there is often a key which tells you what each different bar or area represents. With tables, read the data across the rows and down the columns to identify the key features. APV8w
A glance at the graph provides information about the tow kinda of programmers watched by Australian citizen among different ages. Looking from all prospectives readily apparent that despite of substantial difference in the percentage of male and female who is watching realistic shows, this percent is fairly equal Between the tow gender in games shows programs. Breaking that down further, it can be seen that vast majority of women tend to watch a realities shows which they constituting of approximately 70%. While male is by far represent merely the half of this percent which is 35%. However, the ratio of reality viewers witnessed an upward trajectory were the percentage of older people(45+) is account for nearly 70%, this percent is merely over 50% for 16-24 age. Moreover, the ratio of game programs watched by men and woman tend to take a different pattern where older people covered the highest figure with about 70% compared to the younger ages(16-24) which comprise merely the half. Whereas the Middle Ages ( 25-44) constitute the least percentage with approximately 40%. It is interesting to note, that older people take the lead in the proportion of programs watching among all ages.
A glance at the graph provides information about the tow kinda of programmers
watched
by Australian citizen among
different
ages.

Looking from all
prospectives
readily
apparent that
despite of
substantial difference in the percentage of male and female who is watching realistic
shows
, this percent is
fairly
equal Between the tow gender in games
shows
programs.

Breaking that down
further
, it can be
seen
that vast majority of women tend to
watch
a realities
shows
which
they constituting
of approximately 70%.
While
male is by far represent
merely
the half of this percent which is 35%.

However
, the ratio of reality viewers witnessed an upward trajectory were the percentage of older
people
(45+) is account for
nearly
70%, this percent is
merely
over 50% for 16-24 age.

Moreover
, the ratio of game programs
watched
by
men
and woman tend to take a
different
pattern where older
people
covered the highest figure with about 70% compared to the younger ages(16-24) which comprise
merely
the half.
Whereas
the Middle Ages
(
25-44) constitute the least percentage with approximately 40%.

It is interesting to note, that older
people
take the lead in the proportion of programs watching among all ages.
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IELTS academic With bar and pie charts, there is often a key which tells you what each different bar or area represents. With tables, read the data across the rows and down the columns to identify the key features.

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