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The bar graph highlights the numbers of air conditioning unit sell data in two countries over a seven months period. overall, from the graph we can obeserve the purchase of air conditioning in the UK was high rise in october. in fact, approximately 20thousand of them were sell out. Intrestingly the figure in May was same (about 7thousand) for both the countries. As we can figure it out, by the month of june Australia was in its peak
The bar graph highlights the numbers of air conditioning unit sell data in two countries over a seven months period.

overall
, from the graph we can
obeserve
the
purchase
of air conditioning in the UK was high rise in
october
.
in
fact, approximately 20thousand of them were
sell
out.
Intrestingly
the figure in May was same (about 7thousand) for both the countries.

As we can figure it out, by the month of
june
Australia was in its peak
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IELTS academic air conditioning units bought (in thousand)

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3 paragraphs
77 words
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