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The given bar graph illustrates the amount of money spent on consumer goods in 2 countries (France and UK) in 2010.

The given bar graph illustrates the amount of money spent on consumer goods in 2 countries (France and UK) in 2010. 73025

The given bar graph illustrates the amount of money spent on consumer goods in 2 countries (France and UK) in 2010. Units are measured in pounds sterling. Overall, the British spend more than the french on consumer goods. The largest contributor in the 2 countries was cars while the smallest was perfume. In terms of cars, people in the UK spent just over 450000 as opposed to the french spent 400000. Similarly, the books were also higher in the UK than France at roughly 400000 and 300000, respectively. Another point to highlight is that the expenditure of cameras in the UK is 350000 which is more than double that of France at only 150000. Regarding the rest of the items, the amount of money spent on computers in France is approximately 375000 while the UK spent 25000 less. Likewise, the french spent 200000 on perfume while the British spent almost 150000, perfume was the lowest expenditure accumulated in both countries.

The This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 bar graph illustrates the amount of money You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwastedfinisheduseddeadlost
spent
 on consumer This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :productscommoditiesmerchandises
goods
 in 2 countries (France and UK) in 2010. Units are measured
 in pounds sterling.

Overall
, the British spend more than the "French" needs to be capitalized when not used as a verb.French
french
 on consumer This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :productscommoditiesmerchandises
goods
. The largest contributor in the 2 countries was cars while the smallest was perfume.

In terms of cars, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 in the UK You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwastedfinisheduseddeadlost
spent
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 over 450000 as opposed to the "French" needs to be capitalized when not used as a verb.French
french
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwastedfinisheduseddeadlost
spent
 400000. Similarly
, the books were also
 higher in the UK than France at roughly 400000 and 300000, respectively
. Another point to highlight is that the expenditure of cameras in the UK is 350000 which is more than double that of France at This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 150000.

Regarding the rest of the items, the amount of money You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwastedfinisheduseddeadlost
spent
 on computers in France is approximately 375000 while the UK You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwastedfinisheduseddeadlost
spent
 25000 less. Likewise
, the "French" needs to be capitalized when not used as a verb.French
french
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwastedfinisheduseddeadlost
spent
 200000 on perfume while the British You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwastedfinisheduseddeadlost
spent
 almost 150000, perfume was the lowest expenditure accumulated in both countries. 