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Bar Chart gives the details goods and amounts of the some European countries.

Bar Chart gives the details goods and amounts of the some European countries. kWR9R
The chart demonstrates us the amount of money which people spent on six products in four different European countries. In all cases, Britain spent the most money on all products among all countries. Germany, however, did the lowest spending. Italy and France gave out the average amount of money for all the consumer goods. Britain spent nearly 280 pounds on photographic films which was followed by toys with 170 pounds and CDs with 160 pounds. Britain spent the less money on personel stereos and tennis racquets. However, Germany spent the lowest money on photographic films which was approximately 150 pounds. Germany spent the average amount of 150 pounds on all other products except the tennis racquets, which was over 150 pounds. France did the highest spending on photographic films with nearly 170 pounds and the lowest one on tennis racquets, which was 140. However, Italy gave out the highest money for toys and the lowest money for personnel stereos. Both Italy and France spent same amount of money on toys which was approximately 160 pounds.
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IELTS academic Bar Chart gives the details goods and amounts of the some European countries.

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