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Bar chart depicts about the overweight adults in varous nations.

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The bar graph illustrates the information regarding the proportion of overweight adults in four nations between 1980 and 2000. It can be clearly seen from the bar graph that the proportion of overweight adults in japan was similar in 1980 and 1990 and it was accounted to be 1%. Whereas in 2000, it was increased by 1%. In finland, the maximum percentage of overweight adults was in 2000 which was marked by 11%, while in 1980 and 1990, the proportion was the highest as compared to the percentum of japan
The bar graph illustrates the information regarding the proportion of overweight adults in four nations between 1980 and 2000. It can be
clearly
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seen
from the bar graph that the proportion of overweight adults in japan was similar in 1980 and 1990 and it
was accounted
to be 1%. Whereas in 2000, it
was increased
by 1%. In
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finland
, the maximum percentage of overweight adults was in 2000 which
was marked
by 11%, while in 1980 and 1990, the proportion was the highest as compared to the
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percentum
of
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japan
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IELTS academic Bar chart depicts about the overweight adults in varous nations.

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  American English
1 paragraphs
89 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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