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The diagrams below show the changes that have taken place in the village of Seavile from 1995 until the present day.

The diagrams below show the changes that have taken place in the village of Seavile from 1995 until the present day. pajVD

The diagrams depict how a village has modified over a period of 26 years, from 1995 up to now. Overall, this town has experienced a remarkable modernization, with a tremendous development in its facilities and life of residents has became more convenient. Looking at the map in detail, in 1995, there were 12 houses which loacted in the northwest of the map. But 3 accommodations are constructed for people to live in at the moment. Subsequently, the shops and fish markets in the southwest of the village have been replaced with several restaurants and apartments to serve the utilization of citizens. The sea has remained untouched but the fishing port was disapeared during the period. Moving to other side of the map, the farmland and forest park have been demolished to make way for a golf court and a tennis court. After that, the hotel and the café which were situated in the southwest of the map have remained intact from 1995 until the present day. Eventually, a car park near the hotel has been set up in order to reduce traffic flows on the residential village

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now
. Overall
, this town has experienced a remarkable modernization, with a tremendous development in its facilities and life of residents has Use past participle here: "become".become
became
 more convenient.

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 in detail, in 1995, there were 12 This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residences
houses
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 in the northwest of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpicturesketchoutlinegraphdesignplan
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people
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live
 in at the moment. Subsequently
, the shops and fish markets in the southwest of the village have been replaced
 with several restaurants and apartments to serve the utilization of citizens. The sea has remained untouched This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 the fishing port was Possible spelling mistake found.disappeared
disapeared
 during the period.

Moving to other side of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpicturesketchoutlinegraphdesignplan
map
, the farmland and forest park have been demolished
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 way for a golf court and a tennis court. After that, the hotel and the café which were situated
 in the southwest of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpicturesketchoutlinegraphdesignplan
map
 have remained intact from 1995 until the present day. Eventually
, a car park near the hotel has been set
 up in order to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviate
reduce
 traffic flows on the residential village