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The diagrams below show the changes that have taken place in the village of Seavile from 1995 until the present day.

The diagrams below show the changes that have taken place in the village of Seavile from 1995 until the present day. pajVD
The diagrams depict how a village has modified over a period of 26 years, from 1995 up to now. Overall, this town has experienced a remarkable modernization, with a tremendous development in its facilities and life of residents has became more convenient. Looking at the map in detail, in 1995, there were 12 houses which loacted in the northwest of the map. But 3 accommodations are constructed for people to live in at the moment. Subsequently, the shops and fish markets in the southwest of the village have been replaced with several restaurants and apartments to serve the utilization of citizens. The sea has remained untouched but the fishing port was disapeared during the period. Moving to other side of the map, the farmland and forest park have been demolished to make way for a golf court and a tennis court. After that, the hotel and the café which were situated in the southwest of the map have remained intact from 1995 until the present day. Eventually, a car park near the hotel has been set up in order to reduce traffic flows on the residential village
The diagrams depict how a village has modified over a period of 26 years, from 1995 up to
now
.
Overall
, this town has experienced a remarkable modernization, with a tremendous development in its facilities and life of residents has
became
more convenient.

Looking at the
map
in detail, in 1995, there were 12
houses
which
loacted
in the northwest of the
map
.
But
3 accommodations
are constructed
for
people
to
live
in at the moment.
Subsequently
, the shops and fish markets in the southwest of the village have
been replaced
with several restaurants and apartments to serve the utilization of citizens. The sea has remained untouched
but
the fishing port was
disapeared
during the period.

Moving to other side of the
map
, the farmland and forest park have
been demolished
to
make
way for a golf court and a tennis court. After that, the hotel and the café which
were situated
in the southwest of the
map
have remained intact from 1995 until the present day.
Eventually
, a car park near the hotel has
been set
up in order to
reduce
traffic flows on the residential village
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IELTS academic The diagrams below show the changes that have taken place in the village of Seavile from 1995 until the present day.

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186 words
6.0
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