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The table below gives information about student in role meant at Manchester University in 1937 1967 and 2017 summarised information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant relevant

The table below gives information about student in role meant at Manchester University in 1937 1967 and 2017 summarised information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant relevant j8eYa

The tabular representation despite the information about people sit in the station at the monster university in three different years. Taking into account the enrolment of new students which was 1133 In year 1967 which was 906 more more than students in 1937 and 5111 less than 2017 further the environment of female count were highest in 2017 with 55% followed by 45% in 1937 and 35% in 1956 where as the percentage of males were maximum in 1967 one accounted to 65% and minimum in 2017 45%. Moving toward people who are within 40 miles of the monster or 55% 15% and 2% respectively in 1937, 1968 and 2017 further more students from outside the country were similar in 1937 and 1967. to conclude there are more admissions in 2017 in all the spheres.

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people
 sit in the station at the monster university in three This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 years.

Taking into account the Possible spelling mistake. 'enrolment' is British English.enrollment
enrolment
 of new students which was 1133 In year 1967 which was 906 Possible typo: you repeated a wordmore
more more
 than students in 1937 and 5111 less than 2017 further
 the environment of female count were highest in 2017 with 55% followed by 45% in 1937 and 35% in 1956 Did you mean "whereas"?whereas
where as
 the percentage of males were maximum in 1967 one accounted to 65% and minimum in 2017 45%.

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people
 who are within Writing for an international audience? Consider adding the metric equivalent.40 miles (ca. 64 km)40 miles (64.37 km)40 miles (ca. 64 kilometers)40 miles (64.37 kilometers)40 miles (ca. 64,374 m)40 miles (64,373.76 m)
40 miles
 of the monster or 55% 15% and 2% respectively
 in 1937, 1968 and 2017 further
 more students from outside the country were similar in 1937 and 1967.

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to
 conclude there are more admissions in 2017 in all the spheres. 