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Do people value water in your country?

Do people value water in your country? NwkaW

Historically, water has been undervalued. Perhaps that’s because so many of us take it for granted because we just turn on a tap and plenty of clean water pours out. Unfortunately, People in Iran, especially in the capital city frequently waste water and misuse and don't take the crisis seriously, it may also be used for recreational activities without any care about the effects as you know, many other individuals suffer from water scarcity in the disadvantaged region and they can’t access water in Iran, southern cities in particular. Although we hear news about the drought but we don’t sufficient attention to it, and I suppose that this is the neglect of people’s distrust of the government. and, that it may have on the country. I think for optimal water consumption may be rising water prices can be a flip to people for saving water and the vital activity is awareness people.

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