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the maps show the changes of a small theatre in 2010 and 2012

the maps show the changes of a small theatre in 2010 and 2012 86NqV

The two layouts depict how a tiny theatre was modified over a period of 2 years, from 2010 to 2012. Overall, this place witnessed a remarkable modernization, with a tremendous development in its stage and the addition of many facilities. Looking at the map in detail, walking by the main entrance, there was a café on the right in 2010. After 2 years, it was demolished to make way for a large box office for the audience to buy tickets, especially in the case of crowds. Subsequently, the admin office and the old ticket office were substituted by the restaurants in order to serve people to rest and eat after watching plays or films. Therefore, the admin office was removed at the top corner. The only facility which remained untouched was the auditorium during the period. Moving to up the map, in two years time, the stage was increased in size to make it easier for the spectators to watch performances. The storage on the left side of the stage was moved to the right one and replaced with the media and new showers. Following that, the old media was knocked down to make room for the hall.

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 over a period of 2 years, from 2010 to 2012. Overall
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Looking at the map in detail, walking by the main entrance, there was a café on the right in 2010. After 2 years, it was demolished
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make
 way for a large box You use this word too often, consider replacing it withserviceworkcommissionjobstationplace
office
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buy
 tickets, especially
 in the case of crowds. Subsequently
, the admin You use this word too often, consider replacing it withserviceworkcommissionjobstationplace
office
 and the This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
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office
were substituted
 by the restaurants in order to serve This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 to rest and eat after watching plays or films. Therefore
, the admin You use this word too often, consider replacing it withserviceworkcommissionjobstationplace
office
was removed
 at the top corner. The This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 facility which remained untouched was the auditorium during the period.

Moving to up the map, in two years time, the stage was increased
 in size to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 it easier for the spectators to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
watch
 performances. The storage on the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 side of the stage was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocated
moved
 to the right one and replaced with the media and new showers. Following that, the This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
 media was knocked
 down to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 room for the hall. 