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The given tabular chart illustrates how numerous kids were born to mothers aged 40-44 in Australia in 4 various years.

The given tabular chart illustrates how numerous kids were born to mothers aged 40-44 in Australia in 4 various years. rajRN
The given tabular chart illustrates how numerous kids were born to mothers aged 40-44 in Australia in 4 various years. Overall, as can be seen from the chart, the families had two children made up the highest proportion during this time frame and the number of women had either one child or none recorded a gradual increase from 1981 to 2006. While this figure decreased significantly for the mothers same age who had two and more children. Between 1981 and 1986, the proportion of women in 40-44 years aged who had two children was on the increase and hit the highest point 29%, merely over a third respectively. The mothers of the same age group without a child were 8. 5% in 1981, followed by a slight increased in the vicinity of one in ten in 1986. Similarly, this figure with one child was 7. 6% in 1981 and reached to 8. 7% 5 years later. On the orther hand, the 5 consecutive years from 1981 witnessed a fall in the percentages of women who the same age category with three, four and more children were much higher approximately a quarter. From 1996 to 2006, the number of childless women were more than women with a child (just over 15% and 13, 2% respectively). In spite of decreasing in the number of three and more children in the family, there was extremely tiny change in the number of families with two children.
The
given
tabular chart illustrates how numerous kids
were born
to mothers aged 40-44 in Australia in 4 various years.

Overall
, as can be
seen
from the chart, the families had two
children
made up the highest proportion during this time frame and the
number
of
women
had either one
child
or none recorded a gradual increase from 1981 to 2006. While this figure decreased
significantly
for the mothers same age who had two and more children.

Between 1981 and 1986, the proportion of
women
in 40-44 years aged who had two
children
was on the increase and hit the highest point 29%,
merely
over a third
respectively
. The mothers of the same age group without a
child
were 8. 5% in 1981, followed by a slight increased in the vicinity of one in ten in 1986.
Similarly
, this figure with one
child
was 7. 6% in 1981 and reached to 8. 7% 5 years later. On the
orther
hand, the 5 consecutive years from 1981 witnessed a fall in the percentages of
women
who the same age category with three, four and more
children
were much higher approximately a quarter.

From 1996 to 2006, the
number
of childless
women
were more than
women
with a
child
(
just
over 15% and 13, 2%
respectively
).
In spite of
decreasing in the
number
of three and more
children
in the family, there was
extremely
tiny
change
in the
number
of families with two
children
.
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IELTS academic The given tabular chart illustrates how numerous kids were born to mothers aged 40-44 in Australia in 4 various years.

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