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The graph provides the information about average temperature in each month for different locations, while the table gives the duration of sunshine in each year for those locations. Overall, the average temperatures in London and New York have a similar pattern, and London has sunshine durations far less than the other cities. First let’s consider the line graph, the average temperature in London and New York increase significantly from April to June. However, Sydney’s average temperature gradually declines during this same period, and reachs a lowest point in July at around 16 degrees Celsius. The month which has the highest average temperature in London (29 degrees Celsius) and New York (23 degrees Celsius) is in July and August, respectively. For the table, London only has 1, 180 hours of sunshine in a year, whereas sunshine durations in New York (2, 535 hours) and Sydney (2, 473 hours) are more than twice as many as in London. In summary, the average temperature in Sydney has a distinct pattern among these cities, but the annual hours of sunshine in Sydney is almost the same as in New York.

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