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average energy consumption in an Australian household

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The first chart illustrates the average energy consumption in an Australian household while the second chart depicts the greenhouse gas emitted from the energy consumption. Overall, heating and water heating consumed the most energy in an average Australian household. Water heating and other appliances, however, caused the most greenhouse gas emissions. The average Australian household depletes the most energy on heating (42%), followed by water heating which energy consumed is over a quarter (30%). In contrast, the average Australian household utilise the least energy on cooling (2%) and lighting (4%). Other than that, the usage of energy on refrigeration and other appliances was 7% and 15% respectively. Surprisingly, although the average Australian household utilise most of the energy on heating, greenhouse gas emitted from heating was almost threefolds lesser which was 15%. Water heating was the primary culprit behind greenhouse gas emissions, leading with one-third portion (32%) of greenhouse gas released. Other appliances, refrigeration and lightning recorded 28%, 14% and 8% respectively in greenhouse gas emission. Lastly, as expected, cooling generated the least greenhouse gas with a mere 3%.
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chart illustrates the
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consumption in an Australian
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while the second chart depicts the
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emitted from the
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consumption.

Overall
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and
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consumed the most
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in an
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Australian
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.
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and
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, caused the most
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emissions.

The
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Australian
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depletes the most
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on
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heating
(42%), followed by
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water
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which
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consumed is over a quarter (30%).
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Australian
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the least
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on cooling (2%) and lighting (4%).
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than that, the usage of
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on refrigeration and
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appliances was 7% and 15%
respectively
.

Surprisingly
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lesser which was 15%.
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was the primary culprit behind
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emissions, leading with one-third portion (32%) of
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released.
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appliances, refrigeration and lightning recorded 28%, 14% and 8%
respectively
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emission.
Lastly
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, cooling generated the least
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with a mere 3%.
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IELTS academic average energy consumption in an Australian household

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