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Average carbon dioxide emissions

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The plot illustrates median carbon dioxide emissions per person in 4 European countries during 40 years, from 1967. Overall, to 2017 emissions in half illustrated countries decreased, but another half have an increase. Although United Kingdom reduced its emissions in 40 years, it stays in the same place. In the first 10 years amount of produced CO2 by one person in Sweden strongly increased, about on 2 metric tonnes, but to 2017 it was in equal with Portugal, around 5. 5 metric tonnes By contrast, again the same Portugal grew its amount of emissions most then other, accounting for roughly 5 metric tonnes in total. Italy in the same time Italy rose production of CO2 on about 3, 5 metric tonnes, but in the 2007 stayed in 2nd place.
The plot illustrates median carbon dioxide
emissions
per person in 4 European countries during 40 years, from 1967.

Overall
, to 2017
emissions
in half illustrated countries decreased,
but
another half have an increase.

Although United Kingdom
reduced
its
emissions
in 40 years, it stays in the same place. In the
first
10 years amount of produced CO2 by one person in Sweden
strongly
increased, about on 2 metric tonnes,
but
to 2017 it was in equal with Portugal, around 5. 5 metric tonnes

By contrast, again the same Portugal grew its amount of
emissions
most then other, accounting for roughly 5 metric tonnes in total. Italy in the same time Italy rose production of CO2 on about 3, 5 metric tonnes,
but
in the 2007 stayed in 2nd place.
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