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Unusual dream I had on last night

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Last night, I watched an intriguing documentary on YouTube. It was about challenging of chess matches. I really tasted with that movie and went to bed after appearing of credits. I had a very unusual dream about that documentary undoubtedly. What made it strange is that I'm not the audience on a bench but in front of the world's number one chess player. There was an elaborate chess board before him. He told me, "Your turn" and smirked at me. Several noisy voices appeared from the surrounding horde. I baffled and depressed because I really don't know how to play chess professionally. One of my hands moved itself towards the board and the hall was completely silent. Dropping sound of a needle can be heard at that moment. Therefore, my hands were shaking and I thought I had been possessed. Suddenly, an extremely shining bright light came inside my eyes. I was unable to open them. Then, I woke up in a sweaty shirt and felt thirsty. After drinking a cup of water on the table beside me, I realized that it was just a dream. Thus, I was completely relieved. Some unclear things came out in my head and I walked towards the ragged stores. When I opened the doors, I found the elaborate board on the dusty table in the middle of the room. That was utterly resembled with the one from my dream or was them the same.
Last night, I
watched
an intriguing documentary on YouTube. It was about challenging of chess matches. I
really
tasted with that movie and went to bed after appearing of credits. I had a
very
unusual dream about that documentary
undoubtedly
. What made it strange is that I'm not the audience on a bench
but
in front of the world's number one chess player. There was an elaborate chess board
before
him. He
told
me,
"
Your turn
"
and smirked at me. Several noisy voices appeared from the surrounding horde. I baffled and depressed
because
I
really
don't know how to play chess
professionally
. One of my hands
moved
itself towards the board and the hall was completely silent. Dropping sound of a needle can
be heard
at that moment.
Therefore
, my hands were shaking and I
thought
I had
been possessed
.
Suddenly
, an
extremely
shining bright light came inside my eyes. I was unable to open them. Then, I woke up in a sweaty shirt and felt thirsty. After drinking a cup of water on the table beside me, I realized that it was
just
a dream.
Thus
, I was completely relieved.
Some
unclear things came out in my head and I walked towards the ragged stores. When I opened the doors, I found the elaborate board on the dusty table in the middle of the room. That was
utterly
resembled with the one from my dream or was them the same.
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