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The graph indicates the average yearly disbursement of US consumers on cell phone and residential phone services from 2001 to 2010. Overall, there are WERE two obvious trends in the two service spending groups of mobile phones and residential phone. It was shown an upward trend in cell phone service expenditure and a downward trend in the expense of residential phone service. Beginning of $200 in the average annual outlay in 2001, after a year, this figure increased noticeably to $300 in 2002. The yearly expense of given service doubled to over $600 in 2007. The year 2008 experienced a marginal climb to over $650 in the regular annual disbursement of cell phone service. In 2010, a sharp soar to nearly $800 was seen in US consumption of this service. At a pretty high starting point of $700 in US consumers’s average annual expenditure on residential phone service, this figure was soon decreased dramatically to over $500 in 2006. The regular yearly spending of residential phone service witnessed a gradual drop about $25 in a year after. Following this it decline sharply to under $400 in 2010.
The graph indicates the average yearly disbursement of US consumers on cell
phone
and
residential
phone
services
from 2001 to 2010.

Overall
, there are WERE two obvious trends in the two
service
spending groups of mobile
phones
and
residential
phone
. It
was shown
an upward trend in cell
phone
service
expenditure and a downward trend in the expense of
residential
phone
service.

Beginning of $200 in the average annual outlay in 2001, after a year, this figure increased
noticeably
to $300 in 2002. The yearly expense of
given
service
doubled to over $600 in 2007. The year 2008 experienced a marginal climb to over $650 in the regular annual disbursement of cell
phone
service
. In 2010, a sharp soar to
nearly
$800 was
seen
in US consumption of this service.

At a pretty high starting point of $700 in US
consumers’s
average annual expenditure on
residential
phone
service
, this figure was
soon
decreased
dramatically
to over $500 in 2006. The regular yearly spending of
residential
phone
service
witnessed a gradual drop about $25 in a year after. Following this it
decline
sharply
to under $400 in 2010.
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