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The line graph shows the consumption of the different types of junk food by young people in Mauritius

The line graph shows the consumption of the different types of junk food by young people in Mauritius BL85m

The line graph shows the consumption of the different types of junk food by young people in Mauritius over a time period of three decades. Overall, It is clear that the pizza is at peak stage by 1985 and remaining two junk foods also increased every year/ In 1985 the average chicken eaten by people five times a year, after that it was increased to 60 times in 365days by the year in between 2000 to 2005and constantly stable few years. However, by the end of 2015nit reached to peak stage 63 times in a annual year. Even Hamburgers consumed 10times a year by 1985 but it was gone up to its highest consumption by 70 people in a year by the end of 2015. But pizza ate 5 times a month in 1985 but, Afterwards it had lost huge customers and ended up being 70 times year by 2015.

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