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The bar chart illustrates the number of visitors going to 4 types museums in London from June to Octobor

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The bar chart illustrates the number of visitors going to 4 types museums in London from June to October. Overview, The number of people who visited the British museum was the most whereas that of National museum was the least. The number of people visiting all museums was the same from June to July. It is clearly seen that around 400, 000 people went to History museum and British museum in both months. Besides, the numbers for the National and Science Museums were 210, 000 and 440, 000 people respectively in June, after they decreased slightly by 30, 000 people in July. In August, there was a rapid growth in the number of visits during this time. Similar patterns were evident in History, British, and National, with three types of museums seeing an increase to 600, 000, 710, 000, and 310, 000 people. However, The number of people decreased in September to 390, 000 people for History museum, 590, 000 people for British museum and 200, 000 people for National museum. Moreover, they continued to climb in October to 250, 000 people, 450, 000 people and 300, 000 people
The bar chart illustrates the
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of visitors going to 4 types
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museums
in London from June to October.

Overview, The
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of
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people
who visited the British
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museum
was the most whereas that of
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National
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museum
was the least.

The
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of
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people
visiting all
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museums
was the same from June to July. It is
clearly
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seen
that around 400, 000
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people
went to History
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museum
and British
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museum
in both months.
Besides
, the
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numbers
for the
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National
and Science
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Museums
were 210, 000 and 440, 000
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people
respectively
in June, after they decreased
slightly
by 30, 000
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people
in July.

In August, there was a rapid growth in the
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number
of visits during this time. Similar patterns were evident in History, British, and
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National
, with three types of
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museums
seeing an increase to 600, 000, 710, 000, and 310, 000
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people
.
However
, The
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of
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people
decreased in September to 390, 000
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people
for History
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museum
, 590, 000
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people
for British
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museum
and 200, 000
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people
for
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National
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museum
.
Moreover
, they continued to climb in October to 250, 000
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, 450, 000
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people
and 300, 000
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people
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