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As a class assignment, you have been asked to describe the process of repairing a water tap by replacing the washer. Describe how to replace the washer.

As a class assignment, you have been asked to describe the process of repairing a water tap by replacing the washer. Describe how to replace the washer. w77aE
The diagram illustrates the process of plastic production and then being broken down. Overall, using cereal crops as a raw material, creating plastic product process consist of 3 steps. It requires three stages in order to break down plastic products. The process of producing plastic products begins with the transformation from cereal crops into glucose through a machine. After that, using bacterial fermentation chamber, glucose turns into PHB polymer. At the last step of the process, PHB polymer is used to create plastic bottles, which will then be packed and delivered to consumers. To break down plastic there are three different stage. The first stage is depending on nature, which took a lot of time to decompose into the atmosphere. The next stage is biodegrade of burn, which then emit carbon dioxide into the atmosphere. The last stage is to recycled used plastic products. However, all three stages have the same result is turning plastic into cereal crops, which then become raw material for the process of producing plastic products.
The diagram illustrates the
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of
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production and then
being broken
down.

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, using cereal crops as a raw material, creating
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plastic
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product
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consist of 3 steps. It requires three
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stages
in order to break down
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plastic
products.

The
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of producing
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plastic
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products
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begins
with the transformation from cereal crops into glucose through a machine. After that, using bacterial fermentation chamber, glucose turns into
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PHB
polymer. At the last step of the
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,
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PHB
polymer is
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used
to create
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bottles, which will then
be packed
and delivered to consumers.

To break down
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there are three
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different
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. The
first
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is depending
on nature, which took
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a lot of
time to decompose into the atmosphere. The
next
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stage
is biodegrade of burn, which then emit carbon dioxide into the atmosphere.
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The
last
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stage
is to recycled
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used
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plastic
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products
.
However
, all three
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stages
have the same result is turning
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plastic
into cereal crops, which then become raw material for the
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process
of producing
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plastic
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.
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IELTS academic As a class assignment, you have been asked to describe the process of repairing a water tap by replacing the washer. Describe how to replace the washer.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
170 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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