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Annual expenditures on cell phone

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The line graph illustrates the proportion phone services expense between the year of 2001 and 2010 Regarding of cell phone services, in the year of 2001, cell phone services expenditure was in very high position which cost was almost 700 dollar. But its yearly expenses was dramatically fallen from the year of 2001 to 2010. At last, its cost decreased from 700 dollar to 400 dollar Relevant of residential phone services, the proportion of residential phone services shows that in 2001 which yearly cost was 200 dollar and its yearly expenditure rose up to 800 dollar in 2010 To sum up, this graph says that residential phone service annual expenses was more than cell phone services in last decade

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, in the year of 2001, cell You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdialcontactcall up
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Relevant of residential You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdialcontactcall up
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, the proportion of residential You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdialcontactcall up
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 that in 2001 which yearly cost was 200 Possible agreement error. The noun 'dollar' seems to be countable, so consider using: "dollars".dollars
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 and its yearly expenditure rose up to 800 Possible agreement error. The noun 'dollar' seems to be countable, so consider using: "dollars".dollars
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 in 2010

To sum up, this graph says that residential You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdialcontactcall up
phone
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 annual expenses was more than cell You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdialcontactcall up
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 in last decade