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Annual Expenditure of Schools in the UK

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The three pie charts compares how much money a school in the UK spent every year in 1981, 1991 and 2001. It is clear that the salaries were the major expenditure of the school and the proportion of spending on other workers’ salaries were increasing in these three years. In 1981, the percentage of annual spending on teachers’ salaries was 40%, which rose up to 50% in 1991, with the decrease by 5% in 2001. By contrast, 15% of the budget of the school went to furniture and equipment, after which the figure dropped to 15%. While 2001 saw a considerate rise of the percentage of this category, with the figure of 23% of the spending in this year. Resources, such as books cost 15% of the budget of the school in 1981, reaching up to 20% in year 1991, while the percentage declined to 9% after 10 years. At the same time, there was a decline in the proportion of the school spending on other workers’ salaries, from 28% to 15% in the two decades. (We can also see that the figures of the expenditure on insurance remained comparatively steady, lower the 9% every year. )
The three pie charts compares how much money a
school
in the UK spent every
year
in 1981, 1991 and 2001.

It is
clear
that the
salaries
were the major expenditure of the
school
and the proportion of
spending
on other workers’
salaries
were increasing in these three years.

In 1981, the percentage of annual
spending
on teachers’
salaries
was 40%, which rose up to 50% in 1991, with the decrease by 5% in 2001. By contrast, 15% of the budget of the
school
went to furniture and equipment, after which the figure dropped to 15%. While 2001
saw
a considerate rise of the percentage of this category, with the figure of 23% of the
spending
in this year.

Resources, such as books cost 15% of the budget of the
school
in 1981, reaching up to 20% in
year
1991, while the percentage declined to 9% after 10 years. At the same time, there was a decline in the proportion of the
school
spending
on other workers’
salaries
, from 28% to 15% in the two decades.
(We
can
also
see
that the figures of the expenditure on insurance remained
comparatively
steady, lower the 9% every
year
. )
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IELTS academic Annual Expenditure of Schools in the UK

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