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The diagram illustrates how West Park Secondary School has transformed over a period of 60 years since its establishments in 1950. Overall, the school saw significant growth although its recreational facilities did not develop as much as its building and parking space. In 1950, the school was a single building located along the main road and to the right of the series of houses. There was a large playground which was located right behind the school building to the right of some farmland. Thirty years later in 1980, the three rows of houses were demolished and constructed in a car park, as well as a new science block, for the school while the old school building was changed into its main building. The farmland was also replaced by new sports field, however the playground remained unchanged. In the last year, 2010, the car park was extended to the previously allocated to the sports field. However, about a third of the old playground was turned into a new, yet much smaller, sports filed.

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