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the amount of money that was expended by the UAE government

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The pie chart expresses the amount of money that was expended by the UAE government in different sectors in 2000. As is presented, this government’s total budget had AED 315 billion for the year 2000. Overall, the UAE government’s maximum funds went in social security and healthcare sectors while the opposite was true for transport, housing, and industry & employment categories. According to the chart, social security sort made up the highest deposit in all groups, at AED 100 billion from their national budget of AED 315 billion. This year health and personal social services took a sixth of the total budget which was the second-largest sector in terms of expenditure made by the UAE authority, whereas 38 billion AED was spent on education. In contrast, the government only used 9 billion in the transport category and 13 billion for the industry, employment, and agriculture sectors which occupied the lowest amount of money in their national budget. While 15 billion of the budget was spent on housing and environment, 23 billion was both in debt and other expenditures.

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