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Percentage of household budget for necessities in China

Percentage of household budget for necessities in China yD7VD

An inspection of the data in the pie chart clearly showed from 1995, the highest percentage of food. It was showed the proportion of 68% and in 2011, the food category had the proportion of 59%. It was slightly decline as compare to 1995 in China. In China people spent money on clothing had been similar in both years 1995 and 2011. It was 19% and 18%of clothing. However, the household products and medicine category had started at 9% and 4% in 1995 from China. In 2011, the household goods and medicine had been slightly increased 12% and 11%. Overall, in both years food was highest ratio and medicine had lowest proportion.

An inspection of the data in the pie chart clearly
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showed
 from 1995, the highest percentage of food. It was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstratedportrayedindicateddisplayed
showed
 the proportion of 68% and in 2011, the food category had the proportion of 59%. It was slightly
 decline as compare to 1995 in China. In China This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 spent money on clothing had been similar in both years 1995 and 2011. It was 19% and 18%of clothing. However
, the household products and medicine category had This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
 at 9% and 4% in 1995 from China. In 2011, the household This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :productscommoditiesmerchandises
goods
 and medicine had been slightly
 increased 12% and 11%. Overall
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years
 food was A determiner is probably missing here: "the highest".the highest
highest
 ratio and medicine had A determiner is probably missing here: "the lowest".the lowest
lowest
 proportion. 