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I lived in a small house located in the countryside of Bac Giang province. It is a quiet, beautiful countryside with vast rice fields, rivers, and churches. The house is a two-story building with six rooms: a living room, a kitchen, two bathrooms, and two bedrooms. The biggest room in my house is the living room, where my family and I talk about daily life and watch TV. It's mostly yellow and very warm. The living room is equipped with a flat-screen TV, air conditioning, and wooden tables and chairs. In my opinion, the bedroom is the most beautiful room in my house where I can study, play games, watch movies and so on. In addition, my house also has a garden in the back, where my parent and I planted lemons, oranges and raised chickens. And that's where I have a lot of memories with my family. Besides, it always gives me a feeling of relaxation after stressful studying hours. I love my house very much because it is the place I was born and raised.
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