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The chart below presents the information of three countries about people moving from rural to urban areas and gives a prediction for the future 4 years. To begin with, in 2000 the sum of people moving to urban areas in Iran was mostly 10 million. However, between 2005 and 2010 the number of moving people rose, and the number of people increased from 10 to around 35 million. In 2020 the sum of people was 80 million, but by the prediction, the number is going to rise to 100 million people. In 20 years the number of people grow from 10 to 30 million in Indonesia, and the number is predicted not to be changed for 5 years. The number of people moving to urban areas in Russia in 2000 was a little lower than 20 million, and in 2020 it soared to 80 million people. By considering the prediction that this chart gives us, the total of moving people will increase to approximately 100 million in 2025.
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from rural to urban areas and gives a prediction for the future 4 years.

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people
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to urban areas in Iran was
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.
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of
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rose, and the
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of
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increased from 10 to around 35
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. In 2020 the sum of
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was 80
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,
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is going to rise to 100
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. In 20 years the
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of
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grow from 10 to 30
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in Indonesia, and the
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is predicted
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for 5 years.

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to urban areas in Russia in 2000 was a
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lower than 20
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, and in 2020 it soared to 80
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. By considering the prediction that this chart gives us, the total of
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will increase to approximately 100
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in 2025.
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