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A thermos flask operations is shown with steps by steps. Explain how it is maintaining the hot water and compare where it is needed.

A thermos flask operations is shown with steps by steps. Explain how it is maintaining the hot water and compare where it is needed. EdJ8r

The given diagram depicts the way a thermos flask operates. It is used for maintaining temperatures of hot water for several hours. So it provides many benefits for human beings. In the first stage of making hot water, some materials are needed to complete the process. To be indicate the structure, thermos flask is made up of plastic cup – drink, hot liquid, metal plastic and other materials. And it is measured that it is 30-40cm long in height. The hot water in the thermos flask is kept warm many hours because it is maintained by the systematic structured formation. In the top of the thermos flash, it is seen the plastic cup-drink. After that, cap or plastic is usually opened. In this stage, when plastic cup-drink is opened, some heat is lost. The metal plastic is followed by outer case. At this point, vacuum flask is covered the hot liquid with reducing infrared radiation and by conducting poor glass envelop. Lastly, all of the maintaining system is based by insulated support at the bottom of the thermos flask. In conclusion, thermal flask is a useful device which keeps hot liquid for several hours that provides many benefit for the citizens of the world.

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 diagram depicts the way a thermos You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbeakerjugvialurnchalicedecanter
flask
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used
 for maintaining temperatures of hot water for several hours. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
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many
 benefits for human beings.

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some
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 to complete the process. To be Consider using a past participle here: "indicated".indicated
indicate
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flask
is made
 up of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withelasticmolded
plastic
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plastic
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 that it is 30Insert a space between the numerical value and the unit symbol "-40 cm"-40 cm
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flask
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kept
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many
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because
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seen
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plastic
 cup-drink. After that, cap or You use this word too often, consider replacing it withelasticmolded
plastic
 is usually
 opened. In this stage, when You use this word too often, consider replacing it withelasticmolded
plastic
 cup-drink is opened
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 heat is lost
. The metal You use this word too often, consider replacing it withelasticmolded
plastic
is followed
 by outer case. At this point, vacuum You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbeakerjugvialurnchalicedecanter
flask
is covered
 the hot liquid with reducing infrared radiation and by conducting poor glass envelop. Lastly
, Consider using "all the".all the
all of the
 maintaining system is based
 by insulated support at the bottom of the thermos flask.

In conclusion
, thermal You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbeakerjugvialurnchalicedecanter
flask
 is a useful device which This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retains
keeps
 hot liquid for several hours that provides Possible agreement error. The noun benefit seems to be countable; consider using: "many benefits".many benefits
many benefit
 for the citizens of the world. 