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The diagram shows paper, glass, tins and garden collected by a recycling company between 2011 and 2015.

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The given chart compares the amount of wastes such as paper, glass, tins and garden collected by a recycling company between 2011 and 2015. According to the chart, it can be seen that paper was the most the largest amount of waste serviced by the recycling center through the described five years. In 2011, it stood the highest waste with 57 tons compared to the other three wastes. Then it fluctuated around 50 tons of waste from 2012 to 2014. The number of the collected tons of paper jumped rapidly to 70 tons in 2015. On the one hand, glass represented the second largest amount of waste. It started 48 tons in 2011 and, after that, it waxed and waned and it stopped with 52 tons in 2015. At the same time, tins also went up and down with the average amount of 30 tons in 2011 and 2012. For the last but not least, the amount of garden waste took the least percentage of the four wastes. It constituted with 32 tons in 2011 and it suddenly crashed almost to a half with 15 tons. Hence, it rocketed quickly to 31 tons in 2013. Finally, it rose up to 35 tons in 2105. Over all, paper is the biggest amount of waste collection among the four wastes. On the other side, garden plays the smallest rate of waste. The other two waste, namely; glass and tins stay between paper and garden.
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wastes
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garden
collected by a recycling
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company
between 2011 and 2015.

According to the chart, it can be
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seen
that paper was the most the largest
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of
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waste
serviced by the recycling center through the
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described
five years. In 2011, it stood the highest
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waste
with 57 tons compared to the other three
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wastes
. Then it fluctuated around 50 tons of
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waste
from 2012 to 2014. The number of the collected tons of paper jumped
rapidly
to 70 tons in 2015.

On the one hand, glass represented the second largest
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of
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waste
. It
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started
48 tons in 2011 and, after that, it waxed and waned and it
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stopped
with 52 tons in 2015. At the same time, tins
also
went up and down with the average
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of 30 tons in 2011 and 2012.

For the last
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not least, the
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garden
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took the least percentage of the four
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wastes
. It constituted with 32 tons in 2011 and it
suddenly
crashed almost to a half with 15 tons.
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, it rocketed
quickly
to 31 tons in 2013.
Finally
, it rose up to 35 tons in 2105.

Over all, paper is the biggest
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of
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waste
collection among the four
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wastes
. On the other side,
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garden
plays the smallest rate of
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waste
. The other two
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,
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; glass and tins stay between paper and
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garden
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IELTS academic The diagram shows paper, glass, tins and garden collected by a recycling company between 2011 and 2015.

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