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A table and a bar graph are provided, while the table provides information on the percentage of journeys made by various kinds of transport in Canada, Belgium, Germany and Netherlands, the latter indicates the reason why people prefer driving cars.

A table and a bar graph are provided, while the table provides information on the percentage of journeys made by various kinds of transport in Canada, Belgium, Germany and Netherlands, the latter indicates the reason why people prefer driving cars. 06eeB
A table and a bar graph are provided, while the table provides information on the percentage of journeys made by various kinds of transport in Canada, Belgium, Germany and Netherlands, the latter indicates the reason why people prefer driving cars. It is clearly evident from the data provided that the most used mode of transport by all the countries is by car, and the reason is, of not having an alternative means to travel. Of all the countries, the country using cars the most is Canada with ninety percent of the population depending on this mode of travel. Nearly the same number of people from Germany and Belgium prefer to use car while only less than half of Netherlandspopulation prefer cars. While in Canada the use of other modes of travel is rather insignificant, nearly half of Netherlands population prefers bicycle and on-foot journey. Having no other alternative means is the most significant reason for people around the globe to chose driving, while 30% chose it for employment. Above 20% of people chose it as a convenient way of traveling.
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mode of transport by all the countries is by
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, and the reason is, of not having an alternative means to travel.

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the most is Canada with ninety percent of the population depending on this mode of travel.
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from Germany and Belgium
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Netherlandspopulation
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bicycle and on-foot journey.

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around the globe to chose driving, while 30% chose it for employment. Above 20% of
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chose it as a convenient way of traveling.
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IELTS academic A table and a bar graph are provided, while the table provides information on the percentage of journeys made by various kinds of transport in Canada, Belgium, Germany and Netherlands, the latter indicates the reason why people prefer driving cars.

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