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A process of production of newspapers

A process of production of newspapers wKK8E
This diagram is a simplification of the production of newspapers that in every sperate stage a different a different task will be done First of all as u can see raw papers comes into the big rolls which send them to next stage that there are some particular rollers which dye the papers then will be written with some pre-made rollers of words in next stage In next important step the big roller in the downside in collaboration with another roller pull papers tightly to make it smoothly straight and lead the process to next level Witch at fisrt the dyed papers will be dried by a low stream of heat and finally they will be reached to normal temperature by a cooler one In conclusion despite what most of the people think the process of preparing a newspaper is complicated enough to be measured as a top technical jobs as u can see in different stages of its printing we must have a specific knowledge.
This diagram is a simplification of the production of newspapers that in every
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as u can
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raw papers
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comes
into the
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big
rolls which
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send
them to
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next
stage that there are
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some
particular
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rollers
which dye the papers then will
be written
with
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some
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pre-made
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rollers
of words in
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next
stage

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next
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important
step the
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big
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roller
in the downside in collaboration with another
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roller
pull papers
tightly
to
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make
it
smoothly
straight and lead the process to
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next
level

Witch at
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fisrt
the dyed papers will
be dried
by a low stream of heat and
finally
they will
be reached
to normal temperature by a cooler one

In conclusion
despite what most of the
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people
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think
the process of preparing a newspaper
is complicated
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enough
to
be measured
as a top technical jobs as u can
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see
in
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different
stages of its printing we
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must
have
Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply "specific knowledge".
a specific knowledge
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IELTS academic A process of production of newspapers

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166 words
5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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