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A line graph shows the amount of time to produce a vehicle by four US car manufactories between 1998 to 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

A line graph shows the amount of time to produce a vehicle by four US car manufactories between 1998 to 2002. okk8b
The line graph below compares 4 US car companies in terms of the hours they spent to manufacture a car from 1998 to 2002. Overall, it is evident that the amount of hours spent by all 4 companies has fallen throughout this period and the greatest drop of all 4 belongs to General Motors. In 1998, the hours spent on producing a car by General Motors was at its highest place, at 32 hours, while this time for Honda was the lowest at 22 hours. The average time by Toyota and Ford was 23 and 28 respectively. The time spent by Ford increased till 2001, with 31 hours and after that it began to fall in a way that in 2005 it reached as low as 21 hours. General Motors had a downward trend all over the period so, in 2005 twenty two hours per vehicle achieved. Honda and Toyota after fluctuations reached a peak in 2002 as 24 hours per car. After oscillating trends, there was a substantial fall in the time needed to produce a car in the US by 2005. General Motors clocked in at 22 hours, Ford at 21, Honda and Toyota at 20 respectively.
The line graph below compares 4 US
car
companies
in terms of the
hours
they
spent
to manufacture a
car
from 1998 to 2002.

Overall
, it is evident that the amount of
hours
spent
by all 4
companies
has fallen throughout this period and the greatest drop of all 4 belongs to General Motors.

In 1998, the
hours
spent
on producing a
car
by General Motors was at its highest place, at 32
hours
, while this
time
for Honda was the lowest at 22
hours
. The average
time
by Toyota and Ford was 23 and 28
respectively
. The
time
spent
by Ford increased till 2001, with 31
hours
and after that it began to fall in a way that in 2005 it reached as low as 21
hours
. General Motors had a downward trend all over the period
so
, in 2005
twenty two
hours
per vehicle achieved. Honda and Toyota after fluctuations reached a peak in 2002 as 24
hours
per
car
. After oscillating trends, there was a substantial fall in the
time
needed to produce a
car
in the US by 2005. General Motors clocked in at 22
hours
, Ford at 21, Honda and Toyota at 20
respectively
.
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IELTS academic A line graph shows the amount of time to produce a vehicle by four US car manufactories between 1998 to 2002.

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