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A glance at the maps provided an Island, which was fulfilled improvement and construction of some tourist convenience.

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A glance at the maps provided an Island, which was fulfilled improvement and construction of some tourist convenience. There have been several changes, the most noticeable being increases is facilities. It is clearly seen that, before on Island was nothing much except palm trees and beach on the West side of Island. Additionally, Sea was around the Island, which is very impressive. Turning to the present-day map, it is noticeable that with time island was converted to amazing recreation center. The first changes that noticeable is Pier on the South side of the Island, where state a sailing ships. Second one is the convenient Reception in the middle of place and then next to the Reception on the North side of Island located the Restaurant, which is looks like more specific. Except of those facilities, there are also one comforts, which located on the right and left side of the reception. There are little house, which were intendent for accommodation for visitors to the Island. The Beach is still stable on the West side, but now there are swimming is legally in contrast before, when swimming was illegal.
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was nothing much except palm trees and beach on the West side of
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.
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, Sea was around the
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, which is
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very
impressive.

Turning to the present-day map, it is noticeable that with time
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island
was converted
to amazing recreation center. The
first
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changes
that noticeable is Pier on the South side of the
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Island
, where state a sailing ships. Second one is the convenient Reception in the middle of place and then
next
to the Reception on the North side of
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Island
located the Restaurant, which is looks like more specific. Except of those facilities, there are
also
one comforts, which located on the right and
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left
side of the reception. There are
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little
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house
, which were
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intendent
for accommodation for visitors to the
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Island
. The Beach is
still
stable on the West side,
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but
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there are swimming is
legally
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, when swimming was illegal.
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IELTS academic A glance at the maps provided an Island, which was fulfilled improvement and construction of some tourist convenience.

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188 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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