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The table above shows the percentage of sports participants by genders in the UK from 2005/06 to 2008/09.

The table above shows the percentage of sports participants by genders in the UK from 2005/06 to 2008/09. yGBeD
The table above shows the percentage of sports participants by genders in the UK from 2005/06 to 2008/09. Overall, it is clear that indoor activities such as swimming and diving were the sports with the highest proportion, at the same time jogging, cross country and road running sports underwent the lowest proportion for choices of sport for both men and women. The cycling sport men had about double the percentage more than women. From 2005/06 to 2008/09 swimming and diving had the most impressive number, the numbers of females who participated had the percentage of 18% and 16. 5% compared to males who only have 13. 3% to 13%. The numbers of jogging and running has the smallest number which is under 5% for woman and 8% for men there was no remarkable difference between the two genders. In cycling activities, men had almost two times the percentage than women. In 2006/07 and 2007/08, the percentage of male was 13. 3% and 13. 8% compared to women that only had 6. 8% and 6. 5%.
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participants by genders in the UK
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that indoor activities such as swimming and diving were the
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with the highest proportion, at the same time jogging,
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and road running
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underwent the lowest proportion for choices of
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for both
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and women. The cycling
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had about double the
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more than women.

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to 2008/09 swimming and diving had the most impressive
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, the
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of females who participated had the
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of 18% and 16. 5% compared to males who
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have 13. 3% to 13%. The
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of jogging and running has the smallest
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which is under 5% for woman and 8% for
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there was no remarkable difference between the two genders.

In cycling activities,
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had almost two times the
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than women. In 2006/07 and 2007/08, the
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of male was 13. 3% and 13. 8% compared to women that
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had 6. 8% and 6. 5%.
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IELTS academic The table above shows the percentage of sports participants by genders in the UK from 2005/06 to 2008/09.

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