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Social media presence in small, medium and large business in the years between 2012 and 2016

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The bar chart illustrates the proportion of different sized business - small, medium and large in the years beyween 2012 and 2016 that used social medias. Overall, from the figure it is obvious that all of the three category businesses had the highest social media presence in the year 2016. To begin with the year 2012, the presence of media was nearly 28% for small business. Surprisingly it rose to a peak of about 78% for large business. More or less, the same trend was followed in both 2013 and 2014. But the social media presence was astonishingly low in large business in spite of having an average presence in case of small and medium bisiness.
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small
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IELTS academic Social media presence in small, medium and large business in the years between 2012 and 2016

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